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  1. Frosty~

    In Progress Eric Damon Chronicles: Part Two: "Giovanni's Downfall"

    Enough? Leafpool was just expressing her annoyance that you weren't taking any notice of any advice at all. If you don't want criticism, then you shouldn't post your fics here. Just be warned that you'll never get any better if you don't listen.
  2. Frosty~

    In Progress Eric Damon Chronicles: Part Two: "Giovanni's Downfall"

    You mean you don't know o.O?
  3. Frosty~

    In Progress Eric Damon Chronicles: Part Two: "Giovanni's Downfall"

    See, you're not really improving that much. You need to take the advice that everyone's giving you. I suggest that you take a break from writing this fic for a while, and work on your structure. Your grammar and spelling aren't that bad, but you haven't laid it out very well. I'm going to...
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